You missed a flight due to a problem at the airport. Write a letter to the airline. In your letter: Describe what happened that caused you to miss the flight Explain how missing your flight affected you Make it clear what you would like the airline to do.

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Dear Sir or Madam I am writing to complain about an incident at the airport, which made me miss a flight for my vacation. First of all, there was a serious problem at the check-in area
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a system failure, which led to extremely long queues. The missing flight directly affected me, specifically changing my schedule. I had to alter my accommodations, transportation, and conferences. Importantly, I expended a significant amount of money to purchase a new ticket with another airline at a much higher price. I would like the ariline will support in receiving my refund as soon as possible.
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, the airline needs to improve customer service in the check-in area to provide pleasant and comfortable experiences for passengers. I hope you consider my solutions , and I look forward to your reply Sincerely Mimi

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Say more about why you missed the flight. Add one or two clear details.
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Make your request more clear. Ask for a full refund and maybe help with extra cost.
coherence and cohesion
Use linking words like 'because', 'so', and 'as a result' to connect ideas.
coherence and cohesion
Check some sentences for grammar so your meaning is easier to follow.
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You answered all three parts of the task.
coherence and cohesion
Your letter has a clear opening, body, and ending.
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The tone is polite and fits a formal letter.
Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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