The bar charts below show the number of hours each teacher spent teaching in different schools in four different countries in 2001. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates how much
time
each lecturer spent on educational activity in
different levels of Change preposition
at
school
in four
mentioned Correct article usage
the four
countries
namely Japan, Spain, Iceland
, and the USA
in 2001. Overall
, it can be seen that educationists in the USA
gave out the highest number
of hours
to educate pupils in
all levels of education than that Change preposition
at
of
other Change preposition
apply
countries
. Moreover
, the time
spend on teaching increased with the class levels in all countries
.
Looking at the bar chart in more detail, in high schools in the United States, teachers
spent just under 1200 hours
a year educating young people, while
in Japan there were exactly 700 hours
spent on high school
students. Furthermore
, in Spain and ,Iceland
the total number
of time
spent by teachers
were almost the same, amounting to 900 hours
and just below 900 hours
, respectively. On the other hand
, USA
Correct your spelling
US
teachers
spent approximately 750 hours
teaching elementary school
students in 2001 while
the time
disbursed by Japanese teachers
were
Correct subject-verb agreement
was
exact
600 Change the word
exactly
hours
. In comparison
the Add a comma
,comparison
teachers
in Iceland
, time
allocated by Spanish tutors to educate elementary graders were just around 630 hours
, which were
almost 50 Correct subject-verb agreement
was
hours
higher than that of in Iceland
.
Obviously, the number
of hours
given out by teachers
in lower secondary schools in order to educate pupils in the USA
was the highest, while
it was observed less number
of hours
were spent by teachers
in Iceland
. In addition
to that In Iceland
, the time
allocated by teachers
to educate children in lower secondary school
was measured to be the least of all countries
. In Japan and ,Spain the time
allocated by teachers
to pupils were
measured Correct subject-verb agreement
was
630
and 730 Change preposition
at 630
hours
, respectively.Submitted by nazliseydakorkmaz on
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