Cycling is a healthier and more environmentally friendly form of transport. Nevertheless, cycling is getting less popular. What are the reasons of this trend? What can be done to make cycling more popular?

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More and more
people
are increasingly using cars to travel, even though cycling is friendly to the environment and health. Safety is the most important reason for less cycling.
This
essay will elucidate the reason for
this
trend with the solution to tackle
this
issue and the following examples will be provided to support my point of view.
To begin
with, the most important reason is that there is less security to cycling on the track, having said
this
because more and more
people
are likely to break the law
as a result
street safety is reduced for cyclists.
For example
, according to the latest survey conducted by Bangkok University, it has been revealed that 80% of
people
who are living in urban areas choose to use the car or other public transport
such
as buses, train because they are concerned about road safety which makes them feel less secure when they are cycling in the city. To solve
this
problem, the government should tackle
this
problem as soon as possible by improving the traffic law and reconstructing the transportation in the country.
For instance
, the main construction of the road in Thailand has no cycling paths, so it can be the cause of accidents easier.
Therefore
,
firstly
, the government should build the cycling lens.
Secondly
, they should launch a campaign which persuades the community to use cycling to communicate
furthermore
they should examine the benefits of using cycling
instead
of cars
such
as environmental, health and less costly.
This
is a quite big change which needs to take time in order to overcome
this
issue and
also
this
needs the cooperation of all the population and all organisations to make
this
happen. In conclusion, making cycling more popular should have good management in order to gain more confidence of
people
to use cycling by the government, in terms of road infrastructure, law and other facilities
such
as parking areas for a bicycle.
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