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Although more and more people read news on the internet, newspapers will remain the main source of news for the majority of people. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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It goes without saying that nowadays almost everyone uses
smartphones
. I found an opinion poll on how
people
 use their
smartphones
 and collected some data. I am going to comment on several key features of the results. As we can see,most
people
 use their
smartphones
 to send emails with 79% and to make phone calls 78%.
On the contrary
,the least popular feature for using
smartphones
 is paying for purchases. It’s quite surprising for me because more and more
people
 prefer doing purchases on the Internet. According to the data in the table,
people
 use their
smartphones
 for surfing the Internet, and it is 10
percent
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 more popular than playing games. It means that
people
 prefer to find useful and essential information for their work and study rather than wasting time on useless activities.  As far as I can see, using
smartphones
 can cause several problems. The most serious one is that
people
 become dependent on their
smartphones
. I believe that
control
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controlling
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 time on the phone is the best solution to
this
 problem.
For instance
,
people
 should communicate with their friends and family in real life. It can help us to develop our
communicate
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communication
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 skills. To sum everything up,I can say that
smartphones
 are the most important thing in our life because we can find
necessary
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the necessary
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 information or
also
 work on the internet.
Moreover
,
sparthones
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smartphones
 help us to chat with friends who live far away from us .
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