In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driveless. The only people travelling inside these vehicle will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driveless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

Many
people
think cheaper
air
travel
should be encouraged because it gives ordinary
people
to
travel
further
.
However
, others think
this
leads to environmental problems, so
air
travel
should be more expansive in order to discourage
people
to have it. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. Most
of
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people
have a common understanding that budget price flights should be promoted for the sake of
middle class
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earners. Few others opinion is that
,
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expensive
airplane
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services should be introduced to reduce travelling based on the harmful impact to the biodiversity. The prime reason for inexpensive
travel
needs to be motivated is because of the social changes it has made to
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civilization. Humans understand each other better when travelling and meeting physically. We now have
understanding
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of cultures more than ever in
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history due to frequent and affordable travelling methods.
Also
, with the lowest tariffs for
airfreights
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many
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pharmaceutical
equipment
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are
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upgraded to save
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lives in critical illness.
For instance
, during the severe stages of
pandemic
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many patients
travel
across the seas to treat them .
this
was possible due to
lowest
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cost of travelling
On the other hand
,
this
surge in
air
travel
has rooted
for
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adverse
repercussion
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in
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nature.
Frequent
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flight schedule is a pivotal reason
in
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global warming due to carbon emission because of
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fossil fuel usage.
Additionally
, several
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of vegetation will be wiped out to build concrete platforms for landing space in order to
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give
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view for the pilot.
As a result
,
animalia
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animals
Animalia
in the area will be disrupted and may extinct in near future.
This
loss can not be compensated with the lucrative aviation industry.
Therefore
, financial controls
such
as price increase
is
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essential to reduce overwhelming
air
travels
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. In conclusion ,
cost effective
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air
travels
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have undoubtedly changed the life of average income earners.
However
, the detrimental
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in
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the environment is undermined because of
this
profitable business.
Therefore
,
certain
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level of financial and
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controls needs to be imposed to mitigate
unfavorable
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consequences.
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