Many people think cheaper air travel should be encouraged because it gives ordinary people to travel further. However, others think this leads to environmental problems, so air travel should be more expansive in order to discourage people to have it. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.

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people have a common understanding that budget price flights should be promoted for the sake of

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earners. Few others opinion is that

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expensive

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services should be introduced to reduce travelling based on the harmful impact to the biodiversity. The prime reason for inexpensive travel needs to be motivated is because of the social changes it has made to

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civilization. Humans understand each other better when travelling and meeting physically. We now have

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of cultures more than ever in

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history due to frequent and affordable travelling methods.

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, with the lowest tariffs for

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, during the severe stages of

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many patients travel across the seas to treat them .

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cost of travelling

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nature.

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flight schedule is a pivotal reason

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global warming due to carbon emission because of

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fossil fuel usage.

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of vegetation will be wiped out to build concrete platforms for landing space in order to

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view for the pilot.

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in the area will be disrupted and may extinct in near future.

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loss can not be compensated with the lucrative aviation industry.

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, financial controls

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essential to reduce overwhelming air

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have undoubtedly changed the life of average income earners.

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, the detrimental

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the environment is undermined because of

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profitable business.

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level of financial and

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controls needs to be imposed to mitigate

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consequences.