We cannot help everyone in the world that needs help, so we should only be concerned with our communities and countries. to what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

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Despite all developments in the human standard of living and rapid economic growth in several countries, many
people
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need help in different accepts of their lives all over the
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. Being concerned about our societies and hometowns is important. But if everybody has a sense of altruism, it can be possible to take drastic measures to help
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who need help all over the globe, which
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benefits humans and humanity. On the one hand, Doe to the need of living in a good environment and
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, society's needs should be taken into account. There are some noticeable needs in any society for that some charities collect the contribution of time,  money, and unwanted possessions.
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, preparing food and shelter for poor
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is one of the issues that charities always are
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about.
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, everybody can help their local
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as an individual in the
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.
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volunteering activities, supporting local businesses, and cleaning up our
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are types of help local
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and the local
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,  we can help
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from all over the
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If there will be an extensive effort, which is not only a contribution to humanity, but it can
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affect our
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,  governments can allocate a small number of their budgets for philanthropical help, and individuals can donate a small part of their incomes to poor parts of the
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. These efforts not only provide a better quality of life for several
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in poor areas of the
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but
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decrease the number of refugees who can impose financial and cultural pressure on developed societies. But one value that pushes us to help even without thinking about its result is humanity which is far greater than any boundary. If every single individual shoulder the responsibility for
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great value
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every cent and small effort would be effective. In conclusion,
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the human quality of life is increasing, there are
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several
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both in our
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and several parts of the
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who need help. They would be supported if every single person understands the benefits of philanthropical activities.
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