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You are applying for a job and need a letter of reference. Write a letter to a former teacher. In your letter •give details of the job • explain why it is important for you • suggest what information your teacher could put in the reference

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Dear Ms. Devi, Hope you find well. I need a big favour from you, it’s a letter of reference from you. I clearly explained why I needed it. Currently, I have completed under graduation in computer science and looking for a job.
Last
 day only, I saw a job advertisement in a newspaper
that is
 relevant to my education so I need
this
 offer. I come from a poor background, my father has retired from his job recently time so I have more responsibilities to take care of my family so hope you understand my situation.
Additionally
, I have a younger sister, she will be joining a college next month so I need to pay for her fees. In your reference letter, kindly consider your name, address and phone number with some details. Please mention me as well. Thanks for your prompt support and I am looking for your valuable feedback as soon. Yours sincerely, JAGAN PAUL
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coherence cohesion
Include a more formal greeting and signoff to improve professionalism.
task achievement
Expand on specific qualities or experiences that illustrate why the teacher's reference is valuable.
task achievement
The letter clearly explains why the reference is essential for the job application.
coherence cohesion
The writer has included a logical request for specific details in the reference letter.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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