A local college wants people with a job to come and talk to students about what it is like to work. You would like to come forward and talk to the students about your job. Write a letter to the principal of the college. In your letter, • explain what you would like to talk about • say why students would be interested in your job • suggest a possible date and time for the talk

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
this
letter to express my interest in participating in the college’s program about sharing job experience with students, which has been published in BBC journal. If my offer was accepted, I would like to talk about my working experience in actuary practice in a Non-life insurance organization. During the meeting, I want to put a special accent on the best practice of making insurance reserves. Despite
this
, I want to talk about some relevance between a tax rate and provisions. During the period when I was a student, I remember that academic materials, which I have studied in college, did not give me enough explanation, because all these materials did not content practice experience.
Moreover
, legislation is changing constantly, and new best practices become known. The academic basis does not have an opportunity continuously updated.
Thus
, in my perspective, the data, which I want to be shared, could be very useful for current students. If you consider my offer positive, I would be able to do
this
meeting during my vacation, in the
next
week, at any convenient
time
, which you prefer. I want to point out that after the 21st of November my vacation
time
will be finished and my free
time
would be limited,
thus
,
time
for
this
talk should be arranged in advance.
However
, before that date, I am free. Yours faithfully, John Smite
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