‘Some people believe that children should spend all of their free time with their families. Others believe that this is unnecessary or even negative. Discuss the possible arguments on both sides, and say which side you personally support.

It is advocated by some when

children

have free

time

they should be with their families, while some are of the opinion that

this

idea is inconvenient and has an adverse

influnce

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influence

on them. I agree with the argument that if

children

find

free

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time

they should be on their own so that as a person they can be less connected with their families in a good way and can obtain individual ideas.

First

of all, the majority of parents want to spend

time

with their

children

, if

this

situation is not excessive it may

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connection, but sometimes these times exceed the limits. If ones spend every free

time

at early ages, they tend to be too connected with their parents and whenever they decide to do something there won't be one decision her or his mother and father get involved with the topic,

therefore

, they will see a lot of harm in the long term.

On the other hand

, if

children

acquire that they don't have any obligation to devote

time

for their relatives. Especially during the adolescence period

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individual

thinking comes up and they start to individualize, yet ones who deeply

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relatives around him or her

this

period will confuse their minds. Regardless of the love parents give to their

children

, they may put them in a dire state undeliberately. A

further

reason why

this

is detrimental to them is

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this

pose

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a serious challenge for self-confidence and in the shortage of self-reliance they will always feel insecure

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every phenomenon. Briefly, while some think to force or learn

children

to devote every free

time

with their families is an obligation whereas some part of the society

find

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that problematic. I

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enable ones at early ages, to illustrate they have a personality

,

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when they have a chance they should stay alone and make

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as an individual.