Some people believe that teenagers should be required to do unpaid community work in their free time. This can benefit teenagers and the community as well. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
It cannot be denied that youngsters should volunteer them shelves to do some community-based
work
for their society during leisure time. This
effort definitely will ad-on their resume which will greatly help in their career. I strongly agree with this
notion and this
essay will withstand my statement with relevant examples.
First
of all, young people
are the backbone of every community. They have the responsibility to organize and participate in events such
as awareness programs, helping the public and government in an emergency. As a result
, they will get to know very well about their land, their people
’s needs and their country’s situation at a very young age. Helping people
without any expectation will extend their bond with their neighborhood
.
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neighbourhood
Secondly
, Schools and colleges should encourage their students to do some welfare work
in surrounding areas. Giving chance at a young age will lead them to work
better for their community later on. Certainly, it will help them to become a good public leader. For example
, Indian schools have groups like scout and guide, National Cadet Corps team, where students are encouraged to help underprivileged people
.
To conclude, I believe, it is true that training adolescents at a young age to work
for their people
will lead a healthy brotherhood around them. To be precise, it will help to become a self-fishless service mind adult in the future. Though they did an unpaid job, working in their free time will give them a good experience and it will help to improve their confidence at an early stage. Being with different community people
, they can upgrade their communication skills as well.Submitted by thilaga.pt88 on
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite