Some people think that all university student should study whatever they like. Others believe that they should only be allowed to study subjects that will be useful in the future. Such as those related to science and technology. Discuss both views.

Nowadays
people
have different views about whether pupils should
be study
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whatever they adore or necessary
subjects
which will be significant for science and technology period on some days.
This
essay will discuss the positive sides of learning some
subjects
which school
children
want to learn as well as other types of
subjects
that considered useful for future. On the one hand, it is undeniable that
children
have a tendency to learn their lovely assignments at home and school. More importantly,
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the pupil
a pupil
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pupil
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pupils
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should
allowed
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to study
subjects
which they are keen on reading them.
For example
, if
children
are accustomed to learning math and they have technical skills, they will face a number of hardships during reading history books.
Consequently
,
people
will be
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an unwillingness
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unwillingness
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to prepare their homework so that they can gain
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point
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.
Furthermore
, youngsters can get big enjoy from studying their likely
subjects
and will never boring.
On the other hand
, quite a few
subjects
should teach at education
centers
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to school
children
since childhood which will be effective
on
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field
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of technology and science in
global
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a global
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world.
This
means that
,
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day-by-day almost every jobs turn to
computerized
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a computerized
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period because of
this
reason
children
should be aware of
this
information and knowledge.
For example
, according to international comprehensive research, about four
thousands
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accountant employees fired in present in comparison with before. As the computer can do every
assignments
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which
people
was
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doing before.
Moreover
, by knowing aware of science and technology
people
can
competition
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with other rivals. In conclusion,
although
studying quite a few
subjects
whatever they like is vital and undeniable, it is substantial to study only
subjects
which will useful for modern and civilization worldwide in the future.
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