some people say that economic growth is the only way to end hunger and poverty, while others say that economic growth is damaging the environment so it must be stopped. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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think
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the environment so it must be ended.I discuss
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the poor once with they provide the amenities regarding
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automatically the
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hunger
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is finished in their
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. On the flip side, one more thing is that economic development
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pollute
the environment. Since, when the
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can increase the growth of economic
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more and more industry as well as companies in their
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experiment to grow the economic rate to remove the
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from their
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of Russia and the research the amount of smoke
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exhaust by the industries of the
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and after the result the
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was shocked because with more use of
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pollution
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at the level of 60%. To conclude, according to my opinion
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view
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point of view.
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seen in some
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. So,
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want to choose another way to
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and
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from the
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