You had an appointment with the bank and now you realized that you can't make it for that .write a letter to the manager -Give details about your appointment and dates. -Explain the reason why you cannot make it. -Ask for other dates.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am Prabhjot Kaur,

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of Kamal Park, Aman Nagar at Jalandhar City. I am writing

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letter to draw your attention to my problem. I have booked an appointment with you regarding a car loan for the 24th of November. Unfortunately, I shall not be able to make it on that day. I apologise for

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inconvenience caused because of you. My aunt and uncle are arriving from Canada for a week. They informed me yesterday that they will come back to our home. I have to be with them during the entire week.

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, I have cancelled my all meetings as well as postponed some crucial appointments. Actually, my relatives trust our Indian doctors too much and they want to get their medical examination done from here. I would appreciate it if you could reschedule our consultation for any day

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week.

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, if you have any query

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feel free to contact me on my number 7888529592 or email me on [email protected]. Thanking you. Yours faithfully, Prabhjot Kaur

prabhjotkaur9520

Nov 13, 2021

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You had an appointment with the bank and now you realized that you can't make it for that .write a letter to the manager -Give details about your appointment and dates. -Explain the reason why you cannot make it. -Ask for other dates.

Today, many people spend less and less time at their home. What’s the reason for it? What are the effects of this trend on individuals and society

It is a natural process for animal species to become extinct (e.g. Dinosaur, dodos…) There is no reason why people should try to prevent this from happening. agree or disagree?

Nowadays, most of the information is available on the Internet, whereas in the past, knowledge was stored in books and on paper. Do you think the advantages of this situation outweigh its disadvantages?

In many countries people have to pay for medical care, but some think that it should be a free service provided by the government. To what extent do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge and experience.