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You recently won a photography competition and your photo is going to be shown in an exhibition. Invite your friend for the exhibition. Please describe -Competition and prize. -About the photograph. -Invite your friend.

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Dear Sonia, I hope
this
 letter finds you in radiant health and the best of spirits. I am writing
this
 letter to share with you the good news that I have won the
first
 prize in a photography competition and
this
 photograph is going to display in an
exhibition
. I would love it if you would here with me on an
exhibition
 day that will be held on
next
 week. You know very well how much I have a passion for photography. My brother gave me a Canon camera for a
photoshoot
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 three years ago and I have been clicking pictures of anything that fascinated me.
Last
 month, I visited
to
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my grandmothers’ village where I saw a multifarious taste of culture and I captured every moment.
Also
, I saw peacocks and peahens, I could capture
such
close-up
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 that
after
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I could not believe when saw those shots. Every year, I participated in a photography function organized by NGO in my locality. They have a prize of Rs. 10,000 for winner and display the best photo in Art and Craft
exhibition
.
This
 year they decided to display my pictures. I am very excited about the
exhibition
 day that will be held on the 12th of December in club Cabana. I hope you would definitely come. Looking forward
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 your positive reply. Yours lovingly, Prabhjot Kaur
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