5. The government should control the amount of violence in films and on television in order to decrease the violent crimes in society. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this issue?

For the purpose of reducing violence in

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society , some individuals requested policymakers to practice more control

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the content of movies and

television

programs.

However

, In my opinion,

goverments

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governments

government

do not have the right to

interfer

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interfere

with

such

an issue for the following reasons.

First

of all, there is no single evidence ,

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, that the content of what people watch on

television

or on theatre has something to do with

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behavior

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, and undoubtedly, streets' crime incidents are a result of other social, financial and educational factors and are not simply connected to

peopl's

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people's

favourite genre of films or

television

's show.

Moreover

, many studies in criminology revealed that exposing violent people to

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one hour of

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action film scenes on daily basis might be

benificial

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beneficial

to mitigate the repressed anger and

hostality

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hostility

in their

subconscience

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sub conscience

and it is capable of reducing their intentions to harm

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others by 20%.

Secondly

, governments control on cinemas and

television

programs could

interfer

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interfere

with the free personal choice that human being has struggled for many centuries in order to enjoy.

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words

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I am

affraid

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afraid

that

such

a practice might

allows

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the political class pass to cross past the red line of

human;s

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rights, and to establish

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the

dectatorship

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dictatorship

of policymakers. In many developing countries, for illustration, governments have the right and power to stop

prodcasting

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broadcasting

podcasting

any program or drama series, based on the claim of

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protection against violent behaviour. In short, street violence and all kind of crimes are mostly a consequence of interacting social, financial, and educational factors ,

thus

, they are not related to the content of films or drama series being watched by individuals and

goverments

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governments

government

should not practice any kind of audition on these artistic activities.