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Many parents these days work in other countries, taking their families with them. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages?

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Living in foreign
countries
 and working in other
countries
 is a new experience for each person. Some people who have not any job in their
countries
 or have a bad situation in their
countries
, they have no choice for migration to other
countries
 for working and have a better level of life. Many men and women are going to other
countries
 for work these days,
therefore
 their other members of families must go with them and live with them.
To begin
 with, economical situations and war are two major keys of any migration for work in other
countries
, so many parents these days have to go to different
countries
 to find a new job and build their family's
future
.
Therefore
, other members of their family have no choice for that selection.
Finally
, they must go to another country.
In addition
, in developed and developing
countries
 are exist better works and opportunities for humans, so many parents want to provide good facilities and
future
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 for their children.
On the other hand
, in poor
countries
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 some problems that arise from that
an
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enormous bad economical situation are related to the increasing migration to wealthy
countries
.
Secondly
, parents need a health and education system for their children, so they believe that, when they go to other
countries
 which is have good health services and education systems, their children's
future
 might be brightened. To conclude
this
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i
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 would say that, there are some advantages and disadvantages for development outweigh, for ,instance they can not back to their
countries
 in the
future
 very easy and they can not see other family members for a couple of years, there is just a little part of some disadvantages of their decision. But there are many advantages for them, whereas they will be faced different problems in the
future
.
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