Many parents these days work in other countries, taking their families with them. Do you think the advantages of this development outweigh its disadvantages?

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Living in foreign

countries

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and working in other

countries

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is a new experience for each person. Some people who have not any job in their

countries

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or have a bad situation in their

countries

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, they have no choice for migration to other

countries

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for working and have a better level of life. Many men and women are going to other

countries

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for work these days,

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their other members of families must go with them and live with them.

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with, economical situations and war are two major keys of any migration for work in other

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, so many parents these days have to go to different

countries

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to find a new job and build their family's

future

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, other members of their family have no choice for that selection.

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, they must go to another country.

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, in developed and developing

countries

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are exist better works and opportunities for humans, so many parents want to provide good facilities and

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future

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for their children.

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, in poor

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countries

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some problems that arise from that

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enormous bad economical situation are related to the increasing migration to wealthy

countries

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, parents need a health and education system for their children, so they believe that, when they go to other

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which is have good health services and education systems, their children's

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might be brightened. To conclude

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essay,

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would say that, there are some advantages and disadvantages for development outweigh, for ,instance they can not back to their

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in the

future

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very easy and they can not see other family members for a couple of years, there is just a little part of some disadvantages of their decision. But there are many advantages for them, whereas they will be faced different problems in the

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