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the information about the UN statistics for social and economic indicators for four various countries in 1994.

The general overview here is that there are
four
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 indicators of economic and social conditions in
four
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countries
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 which are
Canada
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,
Japan
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,
Peru
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, and
Zaire
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, in 1994. The information reflects the great differences that exist between wealthier and poorer nations. The table shows that
Japan
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 and
Canada
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 had annual incomes of $15,760 and $11,100 per person, respectively. These figures were overwhelmingly greater than the corresponding figures of $160 in
Peru
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 and $130 in
Zaire
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. Health indicators, too, reflected overall levels of affluence in the
four
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 nations. Life expectancy at birth,
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, was higher among the more economically developed
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.
Japan
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 reported the highest life expectancy, 78.
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 was followed by
Canada
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, 76;
Peru
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, 51; and
Zaire
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, 47.
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 suggests that richer societies are able to put more money into health care than poorer ones. The number of calories consumed daily per person roughly followed the same ranking. Canadians each consumed some 3,326 calories per day while the Japanese took 2,846 calories. The corresponding figures for
Peru
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 and
Zaire
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 were 1,927 and 1,749, respectively. Literacy rates among adults, too, were higher in wealthier
countries
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, reflecting the ability to invest in education.
Canada
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 and
Japan
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 both reported literacy rates of 99%, while
Peru
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 claimed 68%.
Zaire
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, the least economically developed of the
four
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countries
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, had a literacy rate of 34%.

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