You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. Write a letter to the friend. In your letter Say why he/she would not enjoy going to college Explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her Suggest types of job that would be suitable for him.

Dear Jamie,

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Hope

this

letter finds you in radiant health and

the

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in the

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best of spirits. I received your letter two days ago. Thanks for asking about your future goals. I am glad to hear that, you completed your intermediate and would like to go abroad for

further

studies;

however

, rather than go to a university, I suggest you focus on your career. College does not educate us about finance and goal management.

Moreover

, the development of skills and the formation of

resume

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a resume

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,

neither

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are neither

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teach

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taught

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by a school nor a university. Even you will get bored

to

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apply

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studying the same subjects that you have already read

while

in school.

Furthermore

, they would not tell you to cope

up

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apply

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with your life achievements. These days the competition is increasing to get a better opportunity which can be only possible to get an experience. You have marketing skills because of the internship that you attended in your school. Better to sharpen that skill,

although

to spend more time and money in the university. You can easily apply for

this

position from moster.com or you can ask your friends and family who are working in the related companies. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Puru