You recently received a letter from a friend asking for advice about whether to go to college or to try to get a job. You think he/she should get a job. Write a letter to the friend. In your letter Say why he/she would not enjoy going to college Explain why getting a job is a good idea for him/her Suggest types of job that would be suitable for him.

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Dear Jamie,
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Hope
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letter finds you in radiant health and
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best of spirits. I received your letter two days ago. Thanks for asking about your future goals. I am glad to hear that, you completed your intermediate and would like to go abroad for
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studies;
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, rather than go to a university, I suggest you focus on your career. College does not educate us about finance and goal management.
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, the development of skills and the formation of
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teach
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by a school nor a university. Even you will get bored
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studying the same subjects that you have already read
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in school.
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, they would not tell you to cope
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with your life achievements. These days the competition is increasing to get a better opportunity which can be only possible to get an experience. You have marketing skills because of the internship that you attended in your school. Better to sharpen that skill,
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to spend more time and money in the university. You can easily apply for
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position from moster.com or you can ask your friends and family who are working in the related companies. I look forward to hearing from you soon. Yours sincerely, Puru
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Real-world experience
  • Practical experience
  • Financial independence
  • On-the-job training
  • Student loan debt
  • Personal growth
  • Professional networking
  • Career development
  • Skilled workers
  • Job market
  • Career goals
  • Immediate income
  • Professional relationships
  • Market demand
  • Defining interests
  • Educational investments
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