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Children can learn effectively through watching TV. Therefore children should be encouraged to watch TV regularly both at home and at school. To what extend do you agree or disagree?

#children #tv #home #school
In
this
 contemporary
world
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 most
children
 prefer to watch
television
 rather than play outdoor games. One
school
 of thought reckons that infants learn productively through watching
television
.
Hence
, teenagers must have to watch
TV
 daily
similarly
 at home and at
school
 time. I completely disagree with the given notion. The facts of the thesis will be demonstrated in upcoming paragraphs. Consider Broadly, watching regularly
television
 is not a good habit for
children
 it affects badly on eyes of the infant if someone continuously watches
TV
 regularly
then
 after some time eyesight will be decreased and the dark circle will start appearing below the eyes.
Moreover
,
children
 should
also
 focus on physical activity as well as watching
TV
 because if a teenager does not do any physical exercise every time sit in front of the
television
 it may be lead to dangerous diseases that can
also
 destroy the whole career of
children
.
In addition
, nowadays on
television
 shows or ,
,
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channels
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 they are openly running vulgar content on their channels
this
 type of content promote
children
 to do vulgar activity and it is harmful to that
children
 and
also
 for society.
Furthermore
, there is
also
 big shows that are run on popular
TV
 channels that promote
crime
 activity in
children
 is
also
 seen as a future consequence for an infant. For an instance, in Mumbai one
crime
 happened
last
 month in that
crime
 17-year-old
children
 are involved during the interrogation of police they tell them they learnt the ways of crimes through
television
.
Therefore
, some people believe if the
school
also
 starts watching
television
 in the classroom so these problems may have become bigger than excepted because every student goes to
school
 and do things that he learns in his classroom. To conclude,
television
 has more negative effect comparison to his positive effect it badly affects the physical health of the infant
also
 decrease eyesight
also
 it will be a bad habit of watching regular
TV
 it will become an addiction for every child. So, it can
also
 destroy the career of students
also
 it
also
 promote
crime
 in their society.
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