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, namely physicians and teachers, ends up in

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and health care. Since if a vast number of educated people who are working in a specific profession abandon their own poor

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will face considerable openings, while there are not enough

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cannot satisfy their health-related or educational needs.

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might demotivate

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may assume that no brighter future is awaiting them even if they accomplish tertiary education.

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, who can be

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once, prefer not to continue studies and play truants. To tackle

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as lucrative incomes, perks and bonuses. Since human beings, generally, care about material considerations, providing

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to stay in their home

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abroad for attending educational courses

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their career progression and prefer to live in their

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. To conclude, the upward trend of leaving poor

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by

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with occupation purposes can pave the way for

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of enough experts in their

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and persuade young

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to major at universities. Supporting

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financial aids and funding to update their knowledge in developed

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might be beneficial solutions.