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FAnny is a agreat musician back to 1800s. What do you knoe from her and extend your ideas when reading her life

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I’m listening to Fanny’s music. She is a German pianist in the 1800s. Her composers were so lovely, I wish I could play as well as her. It was a shame that I had everything, but I did not embrace the chance to be good at piano. I think that because I rushed to slam in everything, whereas the talents need time to focus. And
such
 a hurried girl like me it hard to be good at something. It was a shame. Now I look back I feel regret, there are remorses behind me. I should be a bit slowlier, especially when choosing what to study in University, whom should I fall in love with and what should I have studied in New Zealand 4 years ago. So, now Nga, you can live slower, so the rest of your life will not remain hurry with remorse and the end of the road. Tomorrow I guess my health will improve much better, I plan to prepare my CV nicely. Once my health recover, definitely I will take care of my health much better than before,
such
 as doing exercise at least once a week ( I will run to the park or take a ride to some forest when I still do not have a job), I will make my garden become as productive as the time when we just moved in
this
 house, and I will drink vitamin C every day while maintaining reading book and writing every day. That plan should go smooth because I do have all the time. I should be more patient when doing something.
For example
, stick to my fitness regime and eat sensitively
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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