Some people believe that restoration of old buildings costs too much we should demolish them and build new ones instead. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

There is no doubt that the cost of reconstruction of the building is very expensive and some believe that demolishing the building and building the new

property

is better. I totally agree that demolishing the

property

and making it new is less expensive and you can make it as per the new requirement. In

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Firstly

, now the day's

construction

of any

property

is very expensive,

however

, renovating the old building is quite less expensive but it will not work out for the long

term

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you may have to renovate again after some time. Demolishing and building the new building is expensive but you can make your building the way you want because as time goes the new generation needs so many new things in the

house

. For ,instance kids want their own private room for study as well as adults to need their own library or personal sports room or the gym. To fully renovate is always good you can make the

house

as per your new planning and safety, because nowadays u can cover your

property

with moisture free as well as protect with the earthquake as you can make the base very strong if you

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the building from the beginning and can adopt the new technology and build our new home.

Secondly

, renovate the

house

if short

term

work and you cannot satisfied with your short

term

planning, because the old

house

has so many spaces but it was not utilized in old-time as well as you cannot change the root of the

house

and if you invest too much to renovate the

house

if not a good idea

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because may you will again renovate with some other changes. if might cost more. if you demolish the

house

it will be cost-effective and give you long

term

satisfaction. To conclude,

construction

of any building is very expensive nowadays, renovating the

house

is the short

term

planning,

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demolishing the

house

and

construction

the new

house

is the long

term

investment and you can use new technology and make the updated home as per the new requirement.