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hese days, we are seeing an increasing amount of violence on television, and this is having a negative impact on children's behaviour. Do you agree or disagree?

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use
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 and
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gas
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emissions
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 is heating but in
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emissions
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, heating is decreased by 27% from 42% to 15%. To compare with
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 positive change from the
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 to the
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, other appliances
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 plays a critical part here, from 15% to 28%, which is 12 digits change. The numbers which are similar to both charts are from water heating and cooling sectors. The water heating
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 is increased by 2% from the
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 30% to the
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. The percentage of the cooling
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 is slightly different by 1%.
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 is almost the smallest number from the
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