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In many countries,crime rates amongst youngster people has been rising? Discuss the causes and solutions for this problem?

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Introduction
The violation among youngsters has been increasing at an unprecedented rate, essay will highlight the potential reasons with some pragmatic solutions to sort it out.
Body paragraph 1
A number of causes are associated with rising
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atrocity
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 rates are in major two-folds steps. Primarily, deprivation of emotional attachment with family members especially parents. As most of the adults has become indulged in the race to earn money by doing
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day-night hard work, unfortunately, they have less moment to bond up with their children.
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, poverty plays a significant role
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 rise
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 the criminal,a huge impact on
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 with deficiency of money, it would
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 to increased stealing habits, sometimes we hear news like people
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 killed by thief just to protect themselves from punishment.
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 poverty and lack of time for children made them criminal, I believe that the situation calls for prompt actions.
Body paragraph 2
There are a number of solutions for
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violations
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 in adolescents. The major solution is to watch out
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 activities of youth especially when they are growing up. The friend link up should be checked from time to time , the unusual television programme should be banned by a government which badly impacts their attention.
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,there are a plethora of programmes which are mainly focused on
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 like crime petrol a common
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 series drama run on television
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when young one watch these
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scenes
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 that effects a lot.
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, the government should provide more and more jobs so that poverty could be reduced.
Conclusion
In conclusion, while there are a number of reasons behind crime , I personally think that the required solutions can be conditioned to the young brain. Authorities must take
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prompt actions to decrease illiteracy and unemployment among the young and restrict the violent
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mainstream
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 media and games. These measures will gradually solve issues .

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