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In some countries, most people prefer to rent their homes rather than buying them. What are the advantages and disadvantages of renting a home?

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It is true that the number of persons who choose to rent their properties
instead
 of buying them is significantly increasing in some nations .
Although
 I think that
this
 tendency can have some obvious negative consequences, I believe that the advantages of renting a home outweigh the disadvantages . On the one hand , it is often argued that renting a house can bring some adverse results .
Firstly
, if someone chooses to rent a property , it will be sure his home but it won't be his asset .
Secondly
, The lessees will have not the possibility to make changes or decorations to their apartments without the landlord's approval which can at any moment evict the lessees and put the house up for sale to make a profit if real estate values increase .
On the other hand
 , in spite of these arguments , renting a property has several obvious advantages .The strongest reason is the convenience ,flexibility and freedom which renting a house is brought .
For example
 ,
this
 approach remains the best decision for persons who travel frequently for work , it is easy to move out especially if they have a month-to-month lease .
In addition
 ,
this
 approach can be cheaper than buying a property , because the lessee is not obligated to pay the bill of repairs and maintenance and
then
 they economize more money . In conclusion ,
although
 that the rent of a home can bound people of the freedom of decorating them and having an asset , I believe that it is a positive tendency and help individuals to economize more money and have the freedom to move out easily . In conclusion ,
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