Many people think that libraries are essential for society. Others, however, disagree and say that it is more practical to access information on computers, while libraries are a waste of money and resources. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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stayed the place where anybody can gain the knowledge collected by the
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generations of
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. Nowadays, since computers have been invented, more and more individuals consider that book rooms are just a waste of money for society. But despite that, there are many
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I will try to discuss both points of view and say my own opinion.
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, in the modern, more and more
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gain computers or other electronic devices (smartphones, tablets) which can carry out computer functions in the side of deriving information. More and more programs and applications that help
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to read are developed by the modern coding industry.
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, most applications are created for commercial purposes and require money for use.
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, we live in a time when information has never been so accessible to everyone.
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, there are a lot of
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who cannot afford to buy a smartphone or computer, who live in regions with poor internet access or absence of any access, particularly in developing countries. Exactly for
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the public
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have to be in existence, performing the function not only as a source of new information but to be a window in the modern world and to discover new opportunities for personality development. In conclusion,
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role in the life of average
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is decreasing due to the wide distribution of computers, book rooms still have an important place in society. In my opinion, public
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need to be preserved and transformed into other forms
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as public spaces where everyone can meet friends and neighbours and discuss their community problems.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • essential
  • quiet space
  • study and research
  • community learning and engagement
  • physical books
  • rare manuscripts
  • digital resources
  • internet access
  • free access
  • community events
  • workshops
  • educational programs
  • hubs of societal engagement
  • digital information
  • accessible
  • convenient
  • physical space
  • resources
  • maintenance
  • costs
  • redirected
  • digital infrastructure
  • e-books
  • online journals
  • diminishing
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