Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

One side of the

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believe

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that advertising has influenced

customers

to make decisions to purchase products, while another side of the

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argue that advertising will become too general, resulting in lacking

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attention from consumers. In

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essay, both of these viewpoints will be discussed before reaching the conclusion. On the one hand, it is undeniable that many people are purchasing things because they saw them

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advertisement

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. Generally, several products and services are promoting their functions and features by buying

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air-time from

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populars

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TV shows.

Moreover

, the new brand products could draw

customers

' attention by making interesting

advertisement

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advertisements

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.

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cosmetic brand in Thailand, has announced its new soap by hiring a charming actress.

As a result

, so many women in Thailand bought

this

product, as they want to be like the actress.

On the other hand

, all companies are trying to present their

advertisement

. Currently, there

are

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a lot of

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to reach out

customers

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such

as sending messages, sending emails, using social media, etc. If the company send too much information, people will ignore it automatically.

For instance

, news and updates have been sent to consumers

everyday

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without interesting information. Another example is that companies send only one message to all clients.

However

, there is no

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one-size-fit-all

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.

Therefore

, people do not care about the

advestisement

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advertisement

advertisements

if they get only irrelevant messages. In conclusion, both views are valid in some aspects. Advertising still plays a vital role for consumers.

Nonetheless

, the company should send the information based on

customers

'

personality

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.

Otherwise

, they will not pay attention to that

advertisement

.