Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

One side of the

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believe

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that advertising has influenced

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to make decisions to purchase products, while another side of the

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argue that advertising will become too general, resulting in lacking

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attention from consumers. In

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essay, both of these viewpoints will be discussed before reaching the conclusion. On the one hand, it is undeniable that many people are purchasing things because they saw them

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. Generally, several products and services are promoting their functions and features by buying

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air-time from

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populars

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popular

TV shows.

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, the new brand products could draw

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advertisement

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cosmetic brand in Thailand, has announced its new soap by hiring a charming actress.

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, so many women in Thailand bought

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product, as they want to be like the actress.

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, all companies are trying to present their

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. Currently, there

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a lot of

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customers

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as sending messages, sending emails, using social media, etc. If the company send too much information, people will ignore it automatically.

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, news and updates have been sent to consumers

everyday

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without interesting information. Another example is that companies send only one message to all clients.

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, there is no

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one-size-fit-all

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.

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, people do not care about the

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advertisement

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if they get only irrelevant messages. In conclusion, both views are valid in some aspects. Advertising still plays a vital role for consumers.

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, the company should send the information based on

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, they will not pay attention to that

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