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An international language would remove one of the main differences which separates people of different nationalities and this would lead to greater international understanding and co-operation. There should be one international language which everyone agrees to learn and speak. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

#language #differences #people #nationalities #co-operation
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 would remove differences which separate
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 of different nationalities and lead to greater understanding and co-operation , both viewpoints will be discussed in the
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 ,hand using
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 International
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 globally will bring
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 together more, build more trust, create great relationships among individuals , eliminate the stress and reduce the cost of having to learn different languages and dialects. Uniformity in
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 the use of English
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 in most part of the world leads to better understanding and co-operation, makes international transactions
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 as trade , travel very easy and simple as everyone communicates in
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 which makes humans feel at home and more relaxed.
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, we should know that it might make us forget our mother tongues which
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 not good culturally , for ,example 80% of children globally don't know how to speak their native dialects because they grew up learning and speaking
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 been used worldwide, and which most times when they travel to their homelands, they naturally act like strangers because they can't communicate in their native
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 makes them dissociate themselves from their communities. In conclusion, in as much as using
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 is very good and aids easy communication globally , in my ,opinion I think it is wise for
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 learn and speak their native languages which makes them rooted to their families and communities.
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