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Nowadays the way many people interact with each other has changed because of technology. In what ways has technology affected the types of relationships people make? Is this a positive or negative development?

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Due to the fact that
technology
 has become an essential part
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 our daily life.
Subsequently
, the improvement of
technology
 disrupted relationships among societies in both positive and negative ways.
Although
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advancement of
technology
 may enable
users
 to communicate easier and costlessly regardless of where they are, face to face interactions have declined significantly as mobile phone
users
 put their focus on the internet rather than a person
next
 to them. Thanks to many applications and websites, people who surf the internet can explore a number of media
such
 as Netflix, Youtube, or gaming.
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 they are likely to pay less attention to their surroundings as well as their family and friends. Fortunately, an individual who lets social media be a part of their life is still able to use online platforms while letting them affect
interaction
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 between them and their relationship members as least as possible.
For example
,
instead
 of being actively online anytime they wanted, they could have a schedule
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 has a specific time where they can be with their phones, tablets, or computers.
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 limiting the period where
technology
users
 can be online, they can develop a connection among their existing close friends and even a bigger community. As they spend less time on the internet, they will be more conscious of their parents and their environment. Since social networks aid society to connect to each other more easily,
users
 can use
this
 advantage to find new friends who have a common interest with them from social methods which will result in a strong bond and long positive relationships .
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Interact
  • Social media platforms
  • Networking
  • Instant messaging
  • Face-to-face interaction
  • Misunderstandings
  • Emotional context
  • Superficial connections
  • Deceptive identities
  • Privacy concerns
  • Social skills
  • Video calls
  • Online presence
  • Digital communication
  • Cyber relationships
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