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With the development of online communication, people will never be alone and will always be able to make new friends. To what extent do you agree?

#development #communication #people #friends
With the advancement of technology,
people
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 become more closer to each
others
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 than
past
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 time period, along with that now the
friends
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friend's
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 connection will be
more
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stronger and wider. While online connections
helpful
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 to bring
the
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people
 near to each
others
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,I personally believe, offline interactions can not be denied. No doubt,
contemporary
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 era has made
the
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life
more
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easier and fast by following the
the
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new
inventries
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inventories
. Along with that,
people
 came closer to each
others
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 without feeling of
lonliness
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loneliness
.
Whatspp
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WhatsApp
Whatsapp
,
for instance
,
a way
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away
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, through which the foreign sitting
people
 can communicate with their nears and dears just with a single click of
button
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. It does not stop here, in coming years, it would be expected of new technology, through which everyone can feel the touch of things as well as persons. So, it is the only way to contact
with
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our friends and family members which can not be ignored.
on the contrary
 side,
inspite
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in spite
 of lots of easier ways to link up with
companion
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 and family members, I think,that
the
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offline relations
has
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 their own importance.These will not only
recognised
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 the personality and behaviour of
new
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 person but
also
 exchange support when there is
need
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of
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 physical and manual help. To cite from my experience,
for example
, in a case of
accident
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, a number of
people
 come
aroud
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around
 for providing
a
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help like
,
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 blood donation on the support and many more, So somewhere new
friesnd
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friends
friend
 are made on behalf of live and personal experiences. In conclusion,
although
 new inventions brought the
people
 nearer toward each
others
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other
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 and
also
 offers the chances to make a new companion, I presume that live relations are
more
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stronger and should be prioritized.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • connectivity
  • geographical gaps
  • interact
  • social media platforms
  • messaging apps
  • revolutionized
  • physical distance
  • online communities
  • camaraderie
  • immediate surroundings
  • unparalleled opportunities
  • superficial relationships
  • excessive reliance
  • emotional warmth
  • tactile comfort
  • digital communication
  • digital divide
  • internet censorship
  • global connectivity
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