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Your friend has just won a sizeable amount of money in the lottery. She would like your advice as to how to spend it. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, -congratulate him/her on their win -give practical advice on how to spend the money -advise him/her on benefits/drawbacks associated with large wins

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Dear Sara, I’m writing to guide you
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 the recent cash reward won by you must be used for the local society in my view. Congratulations! Your long patience has provided some reward as I used to joke about your lotto’s purchase in the past, which has brought some fruit for you. I’ve heard from a friend yesterday about the winning amount, but I’m waiting for
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confirmation from you. Some guidance, you’d utilise the cash for the boutique shop, which you’ve discussed with me before and as you could not establish it due to lack of finance.
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, it would assist most of the village women to be independent. Pros and Cons, winning
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 a huge amount will create problems
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 the local society and family members as they will be asking for cash from you.
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, you ought to utilise your money wisely. I’m awaiting your response. All the best! Ryan Smith

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