Present a written argument or case to an educated reader with no specialist knowledge of the following topic. “Parents should not pressure their children to choose a particular profession. Young people should have the freedom to choose a career path they like. To what extent do you agree or disagree?” You should use your own ideas, knowledge and experience and support your arguments with examples and relevant evidence

Young

children

have their own dream

,

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so that

parents

should not force their

children

to choose what the

parents

want. Because it will affect the way how young

children

reach their target. I totally agree with

this

argument with some reasons supporting that statement.

Firstly

, if the

parents

support

their

children

to achieve what

career

path they like, it will motivate the

children

to achieve their

career

in their own way, and the outcome will most likely be good as well.

For example

, if a child has a passion to be professional athlete, typically they will work hard to exercise every day with the particular discipline program and will join a club to

support

their target until he or she can be a professional athlete by competing in some sports tournaments, either local or international. He or she will consistently participate in the competition until he or she can achieve the highest award that he or she would like to achieve. Without

support

from his or her

parents

, it would be very difficult to achieve.

Secondly

, if the

career

request from their

parents

does not match with the passion that the

children

want, it will discourage the

children

and obviously, the outcome will not be satisfied as well. Nowadays, there is a lot of new

career

opportunities. Sometimes, the

parents

ask their

children

to be a doctor, police, or engineer.

However

, in

this

current era, there are many new positions in the job market. If the choice from the customer does not relevant to the

children

want, it will affect the process to achieve it as well,

for instance

, they will not be interested to go to school, their school grade is bad, and

finally

, they will be failed to achieve it. In conclusion, the

parents

should

support

what their

children

want to be, because ,with the

parents

’

support

, it will motivate the

children

to achieve their dreams with their own effort.

This

is important to be done, starting from school. Along the way, the

children

will work and be satisfied with the result that they want.