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In some countries the average weight of people is increasing and their levels of health and fitness are decreasing. What do you think are the causes of these problems and what measures could be taken to solve them?

#countries #weight #people #levels #health #fitness #measures
nowadays,
people
 face many
health
 issues due to their habits. in some
countries
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people
who
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are getting fatter and struggle with
health
 problems and
body
 strengthen.
i
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 believe that consuming unhealthy
food
 and
busy
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being busy
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 with works
everytime
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also
i
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 briefly account the steps
forwared
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forward
 to solve
this
 issue.
first
 of all, in the fast-paced era,
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every thing
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are
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 modernised in the world.
people
 eager to intake unhealthy
food
. due to the cosmopolitan
activities
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 everyone prefer to consume a variety of meals and show interest in processed
food
 as well because of the taste and less
time
 count.
therefore
, it is the more chances to get fat easily even they able to suffer from obesity. in
this
 case, they are affected with
health
 problems
such
 as diabetes and high level of cholesterol.
moreover
, modern society is busy with their works cause home expensive of living cost.
by
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this
 case, they do not have sufficient
time
 to
doing
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 exercises daily. sitting on a chair for a long
time
 make fat and weakness of the
body
.
for instance
, the new generation is facing a major issue is heart problems because of neglecting the diet habit and exercise. so that, each one must be considered about their
health
 and fitness.
secondly
, to resolve
this
 problem,
regime
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the regime
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 or offices must provide spare
time
 for doing physical activities in the office.
this
 will encourage them to make
health
 and fitness of the
body
.
furthermore
, the government has to be punished for unhealthy
food
.
as a result
 of
this
, they never do
this
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these
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 mistakes again which is the best pathway for their better
health
 and strength
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mind. to conclude,
people
 must control their
body
 condition by intaking healthy
food
 rather than fast
food
 and exercising regularly themselves and as a government should punish unhealthy
food
 to resolve
this
 issue.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • sedentary
  • obesity
  • overweight
  • physical activity
  • sedentary lifestyle
  • exercise
  • unhealthy diet
  • fast food
  • urbanization
  • modernization
  • stress
  • awareness
  • education
  • government intervention
  • policies
  • promotion
  • sports
  • fitness programs
  • health education
  • taxation
  • public transportation
  • infrastructure
  • parks
  • recreational spaces
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