Rich countries often give money to poorer countries, but it does not solve poverty. Therefore, developed countries should give other types of help to the poor countries rather than financial aid. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
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solve their global hunger. Use synonyms
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reach the needy citizens. Use synonyms
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act. There is ample evidence to suggest that most of the Linking Words
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topmost officials are richer than most of the businessmen. Use synonyms
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leaders got millions of dollars in Swiss banks which they earned through corruption and exploiting the nation
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be assured. if a rich nation provides poor people with the technology they can easily use it for their betterment and can earn an income out of it.Use synonyms
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, a study published by W.H.O in 2003 found that it was more effective to help them with technology to eradicate poverty.
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should focus more on helping them with goods and technology.Use synonyms
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