Some people suggest that sport helps people learn about teamwork, but others say it can encourage to be too competitive. Discuss both views and give your own opinion?

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As we know, the sport has several benefits in
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, sometimes sport become dangerous for participants mental health.
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, sports has many advantages and disadvantages. In
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essay, I will give my opinion on sports positive effect and negative effect on human bodies and minds. Playing a sport teaches people to know about teamwork. In games, the team has to think about everyone and
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is how athletes learn teamwork.
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, in a cricket match, there are 11 sportsmen playing on
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side. each and every player is interconnected and dependent on each other. If there are
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player is missing, the whole unit will be in danger.
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, games teach how teamwork and togetherness work in positive favour.
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clear example is, in
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game
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, A squad needs 7 runs in 7 balls to win the
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and for the
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time, all the team players meet and make a strategy about getting 7 runs in 7 balls and
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result
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they won the
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.
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, according to many people, playing sports has an advert effect. The contender becomes more competitive and selfish. I would say, becoming competitive and selfish in the
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is reasonable. Sometimes the player has to think about him/her self as well for a championship or become famous or known by the world. I have seen many times, players become so selfish and irresponsible that they never learn about how the
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is going. They are so focused on themselves and they did not have any care about the
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, in wrestling, the opponent is totally broken in spite of that, the defendant keeps wrestling with him.
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they become ruthless sometimes. So, I believe sportsperson should not go out of the boundary. In conclusion, In my opinion, becoming more competitive is not advisable for mental health.
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,
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should keep competition in mind while playing games.
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, the
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teaches partnership to people anyhow.
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