Today it is common for many business meeting and business training to take place online. Do the advantages of this new development outweigh the disadvantages?

Online meetings have sharply grown in recent years. These changes are caused by
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increased
demand from people who wants to participate from different parts of the world.
This
essay will discuss the reason
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such
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and why
community
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the community
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should change their way of having meetings. On one hand, the main reason why
bussinesses
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businesses
want to replace offline
meeting
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meetings
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online is saving
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time. It is more convenient to stay at your office or home and not
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your time travelling to somebody.
Also
, during the current situation in the world, we are surviving
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a pandemic
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and it is
safier
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safer
safe
to change the format of the meeting.
For instance
, Google employees
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never worked in the office, they have never been forced to attend the meeting visiting
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.
Therefore
, It is really comfortable to solve all of the problems via Zoom or other social
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medias
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.
On the other hand
,
such
way of having
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may cause less productivity, due to the lack of feedback from each participant.
Moreover
, while you're talking to somebody you can not control what the other human does. They can waste their time doing some housework and forget the topic of the meeting.
As a result
, the
organisator
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organization
of the meeting could not
suceed
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succeed
in the solution. In conclusion,
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meeting has potential
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phenomenon
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to a
bussiness
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business
, with benefits far greater than its drawbacks.
Furthermore
,
this
way of having negotiations might reflect on the company faster and effectively.
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