Many manufactured food and drink products contain high levels of sugar, which causes many health problems. Sugary products should be made more expensive to encourage people to consume less sugar. Do you agree or disagree?
These days, health is one of the most important factors in parts of
people
’s lives. If a question about sugary products
should be made more expensive or not is addressed, it will be challenging us to reach our decision on the controversial issue. In my opinion, The benefits of raising the price
of products
made from high sugar
outweigh its disadvantage and the reason to support these arguments will provide in this
essay.
There are two main reasons to support sweet products
should be made more expensive. Firstly
, people
will have a
good health because they will reduce to buy expensive sweet Remove the article
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products
. For example
, when I was a child, I always buy a lot of cakes. After 2 years, the cakes have a higher price
that
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than
i
can not Change the capitalization
I
to
buy them anymore. Change the verb form
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However
, the dentist told me that I had more good teeth that
in the past. Correct your spelling
than
As a result
, I agree that food and drink made from high sugar
should have high
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a high
price
to make Fix the agreement mistake
prices
people
get healthier.
In addition
, people
can save money from buying unhealthy food and drink. According to a
local university research, ninety percentage of Remove the article
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people
will not buy goods that have higher
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a higher
price
than average. Fix the agreement mistake
prices
For example
, if Coca-Cola
made
from high Add a missing verb
is made
sugar
is thirty baht but diet
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the diet
Coca-Cola
price
is ten baht, people
will buy diet Coca-Cola
instead
of high sugar
Coca-Cola
. As a result
, increasing the price
of high sugar
products
can help people
to save money.
In conclusion, Raising the cost of high sugar
products
is the best choice for me because this
development can help people
to have a
good health and can save their money from buying unhealthy Remove the article
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products
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