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Many people nowadays spend a large part of their free time using a smartphone. What do you think are the reasons for this? Do you think is a positive or negative development?

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Nowadays,
Most
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most
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 of the leisure
time
 for many
people
 is spent using a
smartphone
.
This
 essay will thoroughly outline some reasons why
this
 became a current situation. In my perspective, I strongly believe
that is
 a negative impact on society. The internet of things has been involved with the world since scientists discovered the thing called "wireless", which is a sending of information through the signal. From that point,
people
 can be able to access the internet from their computers and
smartphones
. Since phones are designed to be more compact, compared with computers. It is easy to access the online platform, getting news and communicating with others
are
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 more facilitated with pocket-size devices. These could be the reasons why
people
 spend most of the day with
smartphones
. 
 In my opinion, using more
time
 with
smartphones
 can lead to negative consequences. Bangkok news reported that there is a symptom called "
smartphone
 syndrome" that include the effects of physical pains
such
 as finger cramping and aching muscles from scrolling and texting on smart devices. It is not just symptoms, the posture of the human body can
also
 change when we focus on the mobile phone for a long
time
. The neck and back are not straight enough to hold the weight of the whole body. From these situations,
smartphones
 give us undesirable damage more than we think. The
smartphone
 has been becoming a part of
people
's daily life, most
people
 are spending a lot of their free
time
 with it. Because of the easy accessibility of the phone and the small dimension of the devices. I think that
this
 using
smartphone
 trend is giving humans negative results, especially in physical damages.
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