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WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. ather. The plans below show the site of an airport now and how it will look after redevelopment next year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The maps illustrate the site of an airport now and the planning for its expansion and development next year. The Southwest Airport is
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 a square shape with only one
cafe
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 in a departure
hall
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 and eight
gates
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. It is projected to expand by adding ten more
gates
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 and setting up some new entertainment facilities for travellers in waiting halls
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 as shops, cafes and hiring cars. The most noticeable addition that will happen in the southwest is the construction of more
gates
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 which will be eighteen
gates
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 rather than only eight and
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 they will replace walkways with sky trains to make the movement of travellers easier and faster. The waiting
hall
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 is empty now, but it is predicted to set up shops for passengers after they pass through passport control and security.
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, it is
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 predicted to increase the number of entrances and exits of the airport. Departures
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 has a
cafe
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 on the northeast
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 of the
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 and check-in reception on the left
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 of the entrance, after the development, they will replace the check-in area on the right
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 of the
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 and they will set up a new bag drop in the opposite
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 of the check-in area which will be easier for security and passports control check the information about passengers, and
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 there will be a
cafe
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 in the left
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 beside the entrance. After the passengers arrive and pass the checkpoint there will be a coffee shop in front of them on the left
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 and after the
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 will be an ATM, before the exit
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 there will be
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 a car hire office.
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task achievement
Ensure that the introduction clearly highlights the purpose of the essay, such as by explicitly summarizing the main changes or developments presented in the maps.
coherence and cohesion
Use more connecting words and phrases to improve the logical flow of ideas, such as 'moreover,' 'in addition to,' or 'however.'
task achievement
The essay provides a detailed description of the changes in the airport layout and facilities.
coherence and cohesion
Good inclusion of descriptive language that helps visualize changes from old to new structures.

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