Many people nowadays spend a large part of their free time using a smartphone. What do you think are the reasons for this? Do you think is a positive or negative development?

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time

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using a

smartphone

.

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outline some reasons why

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became a current situation. In my perspective, I strongly believe

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society. The internet of things

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been involved with the world since scientists discovered the thing called "wireless", which is a sending of information through the signal. From that point,

people

can be able to access the internet from their computers and

smartphones

. Since phones are designed to be more compact,

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with

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computers. It is easy to access the online platform, getting news and communicating with others are more

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pocket-size devices. These could be the reasons why

people

spend most of the day with

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smartphones

. 
 In my opinion, using more

time

with

smartphones

can lead to negative consequences. Bangkok news reported that there is a symptom called "

smartphone

syndrome" that include the effects of physical pains

such

as finger cramping and aching muscles from scrolling and texting on smart devices. It is not just symptoms, the posture of

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body can

also

change when we focus on the mobile phone for a long

time

. The neck and back are not straight enough to hold the weight of the whole body. From these situations,

smartphones

give us

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undesirable damage more than we think. The

smartphone

have

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been becoming a part of

people

's daily life, most

people

are spending a lot of their free

time

with it. Because of the easy accessibility of the phone and the small dimension of the devices. I think that

this

using

smartphone

trend is giving

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negative results, especially in physical damages.