In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement.

It is undeniable that
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explosion is obvious in our recent era. In
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concept,
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paper
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become a controversial issue. Numerous people claim that paper newspapers or
books
will have no place in
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market due to the capability to access free materials online. In my opinion, I partially agree with
this
statement, which would be explained
further
in my essay.
To begin
with, it is agreeable that nowadays we could easily access
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variable materials
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only
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lice. Thanks to internet development, publishers all around the world could pose their produce on an appropriate version on
online
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market,
hence
users could purchase their needed
books
or magazines easily regardless
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their geographic obstacles or time difference.
For example
, by a mouse-click on Amazone, I
conld
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could
own a valuable
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, published by Elsevier from the US, on my cellphone
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its proper format, which I could bring along
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everywhere.
Therefore
, it is true to confess the value of portable
books
and newspapers.
Nevertheless
, I do believe traditional
books
possess unreplaceable worth.
In other words
, reading on papers would enable the high concentration and prevent some potential adverse effects caused by electronic devices.
For instance
, some researches
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that reading real
books
would reduce orbital diseases due to blue light
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.
Moreover
, valuable reading produce is not always free-accessed online. In conclusion,
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of the Internet is remarkably helpful for people to satisfy their reading
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.
However
, those portable materials are not always the optimal choice. As a consequence, papers have
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unique value for their existence.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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