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Some people believe governments should spend money in saving languages of few speakers from dying out completely. Others think this is a waste of financial resources. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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It is argued that governments must carry out prevention of dying out
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 in small regions, while others hold opposite opinions. In
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 essay, I will discuss both sides of the argument, and prove why a opt for the former side as my view. On the one hand, for those who strongly believe that saving endangered
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 are unnecessary and costly, they must be thinking based on the following two reasons:
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,
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 group of
people
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 might think it is unrealistic to speak an unpopular
language
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 recently. Owing to the fact that international
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 as English gradually becomes the main trend due to the rise of globalisation.
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, it is convenient for
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 to speak a popular
language
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 in daily life. Another reason for
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 group believing the view that most
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extinct
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 are extremely complicated and not worthy to be preserved.
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, La Gomera relies on vowels rather than consonants, it is difficult and time-consuming to use the whistle to communicate due to different frequencies.
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, it is needless to conserve these
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 to some extent.
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, another crowd of
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, as well as I, are thinking more important to dying
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, and they believe that governments must preserve via financial resources. Undoubtedly, saving the oldest
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 is essential for cultural heritage. It is unique and has many values – historical, linguistic, anthropological and aesthetic.
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, island authorities set Silbo Gomero as a school curriculum in order to avoid the loss of
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, and the
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 International Congress of Whistled
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 start to preserve at the same time because
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 a historical aspect, the Silbo Gomero
language
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 was the mobile phone in the early period.
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, the saving of
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language
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 can largely help us have a better understanding culture of ancient
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. Alternatively, by learning these endangered
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, scholars can study the history of ancient
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 to have the breakthroughs of academic research. Specifically, t researchers find the mechanism of the construction of pyramids through the old Egyptian
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. In conclusion,
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 extinct
languages
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 are not useful for our material life, I still firmly believe that studying them can maintain the wisdom of ancestors and improve the innovations historically.

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