Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The transport system in the world is one of the most discussed topics.

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, the

railways

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are thought to be more charged in comparison with

roads

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.

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,

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essay includes only my subjective view about the statement.

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of transiting by use of rails, in my country

roads

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uses more often.

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, discussing

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the

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is more appropriate. By the way, small and young businesses are

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than immense industries,

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the wagons are

remarkable

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popularized. Why? Since the railway carriers are more comfortable to transit unliftable amount of production, the wagons are more useful for tasks

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as some boxes and so on.

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, it is not the only factor, compared with the

railways

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, whereas some destruction and noise, cars seen to be

more cozy

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for

traveling

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the long distances. Fortunately,

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it is expensive, they are faster and

independed

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independent

due to

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your freedom.

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,

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roadways

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road ways

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roadways

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are more flexible in

constructing

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while rails need more attention.

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, trains have a lot of other advantages, which in the future can be considered as

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necessity.

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,

undependence

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independence

on you while journey

occurries

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occurring

letting you

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relax.

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, trains are more compressed and

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why

railways

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could

became

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an

excelent

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excellent

solution

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overpopulation in the world. That factor plays underestimated role. To conclude, I would like to choose

roads

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, but the future necessity on

roads

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does not allow me that.

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, due to my rationality and

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my point of view, I

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that

railways

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are more beneficial and so,

government

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have to pay attention

on

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this

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factor and investigate a lot.