Governments should spend money on railways rather than roads. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

The transport system in the world is one of the most discussed topics.

Then

, the

railways

are thought to be more charged in comparison with

roads

.

However

,

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essay includes only my subjective view about the statement.

Instead

of transiting by use of rails, in my country

roads

uses more often.

Hence

, discussing

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the

roads

is more appropriate. By the way, small and young businesses are

dominance

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than immense industries,

thus

the wagons are

remarkable

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popularized. Why? Since the railway carriers are more comfortable to transit unliftable amount of production, the wagons are more useful for tasks

such

as some boxes and so on.

However

, it is not the only factor, compared with the

railways

, whereas some destruction and noise, cars seen to be

more cozy

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for

traveling

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the long distances. Fortunately,

although

it is expensive, they are faster and

independed

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independent

due to

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your freedom.

In addition

,

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road ways

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are more flexible in

constructing

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while rails need more attention.

Nonetheless

, trains have a lot of other advantages, which in the future can be considered as

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necessity.

For instance

,

undependence

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independence

on you while journey

occurries

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occurring

letting you

to

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relax.

Moreover

, trains are more compressed and

that is

why

railways

could

became

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an

excelent

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solution

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overpopulation in the world. That factor plays underestimated role. To conclude, I would like to choose

roads

, but the future necessity on

roads

does not allow me that.

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, due to my rationality and

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my point of view, I

decide

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that

railways

are more beneficial and so,

government

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have to pay attention

on

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this

factor and investigate a lot.