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Some people believe that preserving the natural environment is crucial, however, most make no effort to do so. Why do you think this is happening? What are simple actions that could help the environment?

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Some
people
 believe that preserving the natural
environment
 is crucial,
however
, most make no effort to do so. Why do you think
this
 is happening? What are simple
actions
 that could help the
environment
? preserving
environment
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 is becoming
one
 of the most consequential challenges of the contemporary world.
Although
, many cite that saving
the
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nature is essential,
but
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no
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 enough efforts have been done. It seems
this
 is because of two staple causes and a number of
actions
is
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 advisable for rectifying the
environment
. On the
one
 hand,
one
 of the most significant causes of not paying essential attention to preserving the
environment
 from the public is economic issues. Nowadays,
people
not
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 only do face
with
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various
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 financial
crisis
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 but
also
 many time-management problems
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 in their lives. Employees could be considered as the population who cope with these kinds of challenges more than others. They form the biggest portion of
population
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 and as a natural consequence of
it
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 most of the public do not care for the
environment
.
Furthermore
, the education systems have not taught enough
contents
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content
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 to juniors and juveniles to convince them preserving natural resources is as essential as other critical aspects of humans’ lives.
For instance
,
lack
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 of trees could exacerbate
the
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global warming. Providing that
people
educated
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 about
this
 in their junior years, they might consider saving
environment
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 as
one
 of their utmost goals.
On the other hand
, there are
numbers
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number
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 of simple but effective
actions
 which could be done to enhance the overall circumstance of the
environment
.
Firstly
, governments should aid knowledge acquisition
program
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programs
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 in order to develop public’s science concerning the essentials of
the
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environment
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environmental
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preserving
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.
Moreover
, every single individual could play a critical role in the process of saving
the
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nature. It should be true that most of the public should
be involve
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 in the process, but
this
 might not be the case unless most public tried.
Finally
, the
last
 but maybe the most appropriate approach is in hands of legislatures. They should approve practicable bills to ban or levy tax on harmful activities for the
environment
. These fines should include private sectors and individuals. Hardly could any organization gain profit from these activities. To conclude it appears the most significant reason which causes
people
 do not
perform
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environment
 preserving
actions
 is
lack
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 of education regarding
to
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green matters in the education system.
On the other hand
,
people
’s representatives play
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 role to remedy the situation since they have had the authority and responsibility to ratify necessary bills.
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