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in future,nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want without paying

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It's undeniable that advanced technology plays a crucial role in human life nowadays. These days some individuals think that in the future you will manage to read from the
internet
 for free.
This
 essay will discuss the reasons why I completely agree that no one will pay for printed records and tabloids.
On the other hand
, some
readers
 believe that booklovers will continue buying printed
books
 and
newspapers
. Some bookworms think that reading from a printed book will not get you distracted so you can concentrate better. Textbooks allow
readers
 to experience the authentic pleasure of reading. Indeed, my brother is a bookworm he loves published
books
 and he told me that electronic
books
 will not replace printed
books
 because from his experience he gets distracted by social media every time he reads. Despite that some
readers
 prefer printed
books
 and
newspapers
, the idea of perusal from your device is much easier. You can read whenever you want without charging you. Fast learning,
although
 some booklovers favour published
books
, reading from the
internet
 is will give more information.
For example
, my uncle used to read from printed
books
, but when read from the
internet
 he felt that he's getting more information, and learning fast.
This
 essay argued the reasons why printed
books
 and
newspapers
 will not be bought in the future. In my opinion, all the
readers
 will stop buying printed
books
 and
newspapers
 because they will be available on the
internet
 for free which is better than the published ones
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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