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The maps show changes in the village of Meadowside and the town of Fonton from 1962 to now. Write a report of at least 150 words describing the main features and making comparisons where relevant.

The maps show changes in the village of Meadowside and the town of Fonton from 1962 to now. Write a report of at least 150 words describing the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
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The maps illustrate how
Meadowside
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village
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 and
Fonton
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, which is a neighbouring town, have developed over three different time periods(1962,1985 and the present).
Overall
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,
Meadowside
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village
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 increased in size and has become
Meadowside
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 Suburb as it merged
together with
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Fonton
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 .
Furthermore
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, there have been significant changes in infrastructure, housing and facilities over the period given. In 1962, both
Meadowside
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 and
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Fonton
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Fenton
 were completely separate with no roads or rail connecting them.
While
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Fonton
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 had a railway line running through it to the north,
Meadowside
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, located to the
west
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 of
Fonton
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, only had a small road from the
west
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. By 1985, there was considerable growth in the size of
Meadowside
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village
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 and
Fonton
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. The small road in
Meadowside
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village
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 had been converted into a main road and was
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 extended to the east to connect with
Fonton
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.
Meadowside
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,
moreover
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, had
also
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 developed a housing estate in the
west
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, a leisure complex and a supermarket in the south. Currently, both
Meadowside
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, which is now a suburb, and
Fonton
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 are joined. The railway line, which runs through
Fonton
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, has been extended to the
west
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 where a train station has been built. To the station, a hotel has been constructed and opposite the station, to the south, there is a business park.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also".
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Basic structure: Change the fifth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words meadowside, village, fonton, west with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fifth paragraph.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • urbanization
  • rural area
  • expansion
  • infrastructure
  • commercial development
  • housing development
  • population growth
  • key landmarks
  • transformation
  • local community
  • economy
  • environmental impact
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