Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding changes. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both these view and give your own opinion.

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have different views about whether to do the same or new
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. While I accept that changing has
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effect on
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, I believe that occasionally
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need to avoid changes and try to concentrate on one thing. So I will discuss
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in greater detail in my essay. On the on side of the argument, there are
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who are willing to trace the routine and do not want to experience new
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. They believe that you should choose one plan and make effort to achieve the best stage in your
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. A particular example here is that skilled workforce finds it difficult to change their job, they stay and tolerate
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as low salaries, uncomfortable workplace and unsuitable manager, because they do not want any changes. So, they are deprived of having new opportunities in the world.
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, there are individuals who experience new
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because they believe that
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is short,
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, they try to reach the higher levels and believe that the world is so enormous and it is worth that to spend time to find new
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.
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, employees of NASA, all the time try to go to space and discover and make a new house for humans. If they did not have
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mindset, they would not have discovered other planets. In conclusion, finding new
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or choosing the same way in
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have related to their mindset and their wishes.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • status quo
  • comfort zone
  • predictability
  • mastery
  • innovation
  • adaptability
  • personal growth
  • resilience
  • hesitancy
  • risk-taking
  • transitions
  • enrichment
  • equilibrium
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