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Advertising discourages people from being different individuals by making us all want to do the same and look the same. To what extent do you agree or disagree.

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Nowadays,
people
 are bombarded by numerous advertisements in daily
life
, and advertising systems have negative effects on them by making them want to do the same and be the same in their
life
.
To begin
 with, in my opinion, I disagree with
this
 theory because we have the brain to think about to what extent need something in our
life
. It is true that we are bombarded with a majority of advertisements on the TV or on the Internet or when we use an application. But advertising is a part of our buy and sells' system of economy in the world. For ,example a company has built new technology for cars and wants to sell that to cars' lovers. Advertising helps that company to show that technology to them.
However
, when a person wants to know about new facilities or other things can search on the internet and eventually find that, but
this
 process might be repetitive.
In addition
,
people
 want to be different from the past, so they want to change their
life
.
For instance
, by refurnish their house or design new clothes or new cars. The world will change in the future and
finally
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 the monster of advertising will be powered during the time. Some
people
 are soaking in advertisements and
finally
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 advertising discourages them from being different individuals by making them all want to do the same and look the same. To conclude
this
 essay,
people
 need to be different and Up-date in new things
such
 as technology, clothes or their homes, whereas they do not need a majority of them, but it is normal to be fashionable in daily
life
.
Furthermore
, some problems stem from advertising caus by increasing consumerism unprecedentedly between
people
.
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