You were sent by your company to attend a meeting in another country, but you are not happy with the hotel your organizer booked for you. Write a letter to an organizer about the meeting details What you did not like about the hotel what you want organizer to do about it?

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
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letter to express my dissatisfaction with the
hotel
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that you arranged for my stay. I have returned home from the business meeting which you had organised in Thailand. In
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, I had spent three nights and four days. The meeting was very well and pleasant. I showed our products to all delegates who had come from different places. They asked multifarious questions about our items and I answered them effortlessly and they seem very happy
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agree to sign a deal with our company and ,hopefully in the future our business will be receiving a bulk order from the divergent areas. Now I would like to share my worse experience in a
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with, when I reached Thailand I was over the moon but as soon as I arrived in a
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I realized that nobody understand my language English. They all communicate in Thai and it was the time when I felt handicapped because I had no knowledge about their language.
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, I was not able to reach the venue for the
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meeting on time.
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, the location was very far from the place of the meeting. It took four hours and I was totally exhausted every day before the meeting started. I would appreciate it if you could be very careful about the
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booking in future. Kindly check everything before the registration so that the
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time when employees will go for the business tour are not inconvenienced. Yours faithfully, Prabhjot Kaur
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Word Count

IELTS says that you should write a minimum of 150 words in writing task 1. If you go under word count you will lose marks in task response.

A very long letter will not give you a higher band score.

Aim for between 160 to 190 words in writing task 1. This will ensure a concise letter and will be realistic in terms of time management. You have only 20 minutes to write the letter and you need around 5 minutes of planning time, so you will not be able to write a long letter in 15 minutes.

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • gratitude
  • arrange/arrangement
  • specifics
  • cleanliness
  • amenities
  • service
  • location
  • improve
  • solution
  • alternative
  • accommodation
  • recommendation
  • organize/organizer
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